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terence's avatar

I'm really digging this. What is phase two????

This is the first story I've read where the chapters are so short -- and I like how the frequent breaks help to create a kind of frenetic energy where we're switching between multiple characters. A little like doomscrolling.

Great work!

Ian Taniels | HouseOfChapters's avatar

Wow! Thank you so much!!

I love that you like the quick changes hahaha :)

I take it you mean the dopamine hit of doomscrolling ?? hahah

rather than the “useless time wasting” aspect hahaha??

terence's avatar

Ha, definitely dopamine hit!

Anna D. ☽●☾'s avatar

I actually had to chuckle, because I’m a little into numerology and 1247 is often associated with “owning up to your mistakes,” which feels… suspiciously relevant for that CEO 👀 But I’ll let myself be surprised 😅

Notes from the Hill's avatar

I hate crunch time. That's like time for you to do more work but not get paid for it.