Fantastic take on the day 2 prompt here, Ian! And, this is a damn fine poem in its own right, as well. The rhythm and flow was excellent. The word choice was evocative and vivid.
And, beneath all that, the reveal in the final stanza was the perfect cherry on top. Truly honored that you made your poetry debut with one of my prompts, friend, this was amazing!
Beautiful
Thank you, Lauren!
I loved that take on the prompt. Flows really well and is a great poem.
Thank you so much!!
What prompt did you do?
I have had a go at each so far. I also did a poem for prompt 2. I think yours is far superior though.
Oh no, don't say that. I'm checking it out right now, see you there
Don't get me wrong, I don't think mine is bad, just really liked the atmosphere and vibe (as the kids say) that yours conjured in comparison.
Fantastic take on the day 2 prompt here, Ian! And, this is a damn fine poem in its own right, as well. The rhythm and flow was excellent. The word choice was evocative and vivid.
And, beneath all that, the reveal in the final stanza was the perfect cherry on top. Truly honored that you made your poetry debut with one of my prompts, friend, this was amazing!
Oh wow!!! Thank you so much!!! Means a lot and really glad you liked it!!